The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

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The two pie charts draw the conclusion of a survey of
boys
' and
girls
' cultural and leisure activities.
Overall
, equal quantities of both sexes enjoyed listening to music, but a dramatically larger number of
girls
liked reading. There were
also
many differences in terms of the children's preferred sports. Turning to the first
chart
, we can observe that
boys
prefer playing computer games (34% participation rate) to taking other activities . Playing basketball comes as the second most popular leisure, practised by almost a third of male children. Basketball is followed by soccer, which is exercised by 17%. Skateboarding and listening to music are less preferable activities, chosen by 11% and 10% of
boys
respectively. Reading, the least popular cultural activity among
boys
, represents only two per. Cent. Taking a closer look at the second
chart
, we can see that
girls
' most preferred activity is dancing, being 27% of the total.
In contrast
to the
boys
' preferences, reading is chosen by more than a fifth.of all
girls
.
Although
the percentage of female children who play computer games is roughly twice SVoLeo less than that of
boys
(16%),
this
activity is third most popular on the
girls
'
chart
. With a slight difference between computer games and netball, the latter is practised at
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% rate.
Similarly
to skateboarding popularity popular among
boys
, 11% of
girls
go in for gymnastics. Listening to music comes as the least popular leisure, with a proportion of 10%, equal to those on the first
chart
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • cultural activities
  • leisure activities
  • participate
  • percentage
  • gender difference
  • similar participation rates
  • traditional gender roles
  • trends
  • impact
  • parental influence
  • extracurricular activities
  • accessible
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