The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

The two pie charts draw the conclusion of a survey of
boys
' and
girls
' cultural and leisure activities.
Overall
, equal quantities of both sexes enjoyed listening to music, but a dramatically larger number of
girls
liked reading. There were
also
many differences in terms of the children's preferred sports. Turning to the first
chart
, we can observe that
boys
prefer playing computer games (34% participation rate) to taking other activities . Playing basketball comes as the second most popular leisure, practised by almost a third of male children. Basketball is followed by soccer, which is exercised by 17%. Skateboarding and listening to music are less preferable activities, chosen by 11% and 10% of
boys
respectively. Reading, the least popular cultural activity among
boys
, represents only two per. Cent. Taking a closer look at the second
chart
, we can see that
girls
' most preferred activity is dancing, being 27% of the total.
In contrast
to the
boys
' preferences, reading is chosen by more than a fifth.of all
girls
.
Although
the percentage of female children who play computer games is roughly twice SVoLeo less than that of
boys
(16%),
this
activity is third most popular on the
girls
'
chart
. With a slight difference between computer games and netball, the latter is practised at
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% rate.
Similarly
to skateboarding popularity popular among
boys
, 11% of
girls
go in for gymnastics. Listening to music comes as the least popular leisure, with a proportion of 10%, equal to those on the first
chart
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, chart with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • cultural activities
  • leisure activities
  • participate
  • percentage
  • gender difference
  • similar participation rates
  • traditional gender roles
  • trends
  • impact
  • parental influence
  • extracurricular activities
  • accessible
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