The pie charts shows how many hours spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates, and all student.
The
given
three different pie graphs illustrate information concerning the spending Verb problem
apply
time
in the United Kindom University library
by undergraduates, postgraduates, and all students
.
Looking at the overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that most students
spent their time
in the library
1 hour to 7 hours
. Meanwhile, postgraduates spend more time
in the library
.
A cursory glance at the data reveals that 50% of all students
spent 1 to 7 hours
in the library
and 35% of students
stayed library
from 8 to 14 hours
. In addition
, less than a quarter of students
spent over 15 hours
.
Moreover
, another eye-catching trend is that 63% of undergraduates devoted their time
in their school library
1 to 7 hours
. And spending time
from 8 hours
to 16 hours
undergraduates proportion was 28% and spent up to 15 hours
for students
merely 9%.
Lastly
, a more detailed look at the last
chart reveals that over half postgrad
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of postgrad
students
occupy over 15 hours
and about a third (32%) of students
spent
8 to 14 Wrong verb form
spend
hours
. Also
, 17% of people stay in the libraryfor
1to 7 Correct your spelling
library for
hours
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