WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two graphs demonstrate the current appearance in
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
industrail
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industrial
area
and the development plan for future constructions of this
location respectively.
There is a road
on the south side of the area
, while
in the middle of this
main road
, there is a round road
expanding on
the north which is surrounded by three factories. On the east exist of Change preposition
to
this
round road
, a route paralling
with the Correct your spelling
parallel
road
on the south is built with two factorcies
on both sides respectively. Meanwhile, a factory is located at the eastern tip of Correct your spelling
factors
this
route. The town is opposite the manufacture
buildings. Across the river on the northern side of Replace the word
manufacturing
this
area
, there is a spacious farmland with no architectures
.
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architecture
However
, in the future, a small round road
will be added in the middle of the main road
on
the south part of Change preposition
in
this
area
while
shops and medical
centre will be built next to the expanding Correct article usage
a medical
road
. Two routes will be constructed on the northern and north-western sides equipped with housings. As for the routes paralling
with the main Correct your spelling
paralleling
paralysing
road
, the surrounding factories are going to make way for three apartments, a playground and a school. The town will ramain
unchanged but the route across the river will connect with a Correct your spelling
remain
road
on the north side of this
area
adjacent with
housing.
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to
Overall
, the area
will be equipped with more infrastructures
and Fix the agreement mistake
infrastructure
housings
rather than surrounded by only factories in the future.Fix the agreement mistake
housing
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