WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

Write at least 150 words.
The two graphs demonstrate the current appearance in
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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industrail
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industrial
area
and the development plan for future constructions of
this
location respectively. There is a
road
on the south side of the
area
,
while
in the middle of
this
main
road
, there is a round
road
expanding
on
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to
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the north which is surrounded by three factories. On the east exist of
this
round
road
, a route
paralling
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parallel
with the
road
on the south is built with two
factorcies
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factors
on both sides respectively. Meanwhile, a factory is located at the eastern tip of
this
route. The town is opposite the
manufacture
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manufacturing
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buildings. Across the river on the northern side of
this
area
, there is a spacious farmland with no
architectures
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architecture
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.
However
, in the future, a small round
road
will be added in the middle of the main
road
on
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in
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the south part of
this
area
while
shops and
medical
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a medical
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centre will be built next to the expanding
road
. Two routes will be constructed on the northern and north-western sides equipped with housings. As for the routes
paralling
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paralleling
paralysing
with the main
road
, the surrounding factories are going to make way for three apartments, a playground and a school. The town will
ramain
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remain
unchanged but the route across the river will connect with a
road
on the north side of
this
area
adjacent
with
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to
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housing.
Overall
, the
area
will be equipped with more
infrastructures
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infrastructure
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and
housings
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housing
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rather than surrounded by only factories in the future.
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