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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Pineapple exports Pineapple exports

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Pineapple exports Pineapple exports
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The charts illustrate
world
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the world
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 pineapple sell overseas of
three
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the three
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 biggest
pinepple
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pineapple
- producing states in 2009 and 2019, and
breakdown
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a breakdown
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 of the
customers
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customer's
customers'
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 proportion price in 2009. Units are measured in millions.
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, it clearly can be seen that the
highest producing
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highest-producing
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country
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 was
country
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 A, and the lowest supply was
country
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 C.
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, a breakdown cost for the consumer
are
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 in the distribution and retail. In
the
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apply
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terms of the
country
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 with the highest level of
pinepple
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pineapple
- production, state A started at lower than 2 in 2009, and from
this
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 point in one
decade
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 the amount increased drastically to approximately 11.
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, the highest proportion of the price to the customer was
distibution
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distribution
 and retail accounted for above one-third in 2019.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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