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You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, -describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight -explain how missing your flight affected you -make it clear what you would like the airline to do

#flight #airport #airline #-describe #-explain #-make
Dear
sir
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Sir
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 or Madam, The reason why
l
 am
adressing
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addressing
 you is that
l
do
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did
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 not arrive
my
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apply
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on time to
airport
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the airport
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 so
l
 am missing my flight and now what do
l
 do? I am Setora Saydullayeva
l
was take
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was taken
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 to go to ticket abroad but, before
l
arrive
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arrived
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to
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at
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airport
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the airport
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, something
it
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apply
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is
happen
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happened
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also
,
l
do
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did
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 not
be carried
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carry
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 out flight
However
,
l
fly
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flew
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airplane
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aeroplane
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 but
l
got
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had to
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 think
what
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about what
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 to do. My quite unhappy
from
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because
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 of miss rest because abroad
l
 have a
lot
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lot of
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 work but it does not go to,
l
 expert exceedingly to go to
l
 did not know it would happen my too.
Airline
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The airline
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 me beg to return
ticket
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the ticket
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 or it
want
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wants
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 to give
rest
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the rest
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 other if it can not act to both it can be different so
me
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I
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 like
give
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to give
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ticket
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the ticket
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 new. If you give me back the rest, it Will be better for you, because
l
 can perform in other places. Yours faithfully, Setora Saydullayeva
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your writing has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion to improve logical structure.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your points into paragraphs, dedicating each paragraph to a specific topic for better clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a variety of transitional phrases to make your letter flow more smoothly from one point to the next.
Task Achievement
To improve task response, make sure to clearly address all parts of the prompt. Specifically, describe the problem at the airport in detail, explain how missing the flight impacted you, and clearly state what action you want the airline to take in response.
Task Achievement
Use a formal tone suitable for writing to an airline. Avoid overly casual language, and make sure your request is polite yet firm.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • logistical issues
  • check-in counter
  • security clearance
  • system outage
  • boarding pass
  • miscommunication
  • emotional distress
  • financial repercussions
  • alternate arrangements
  • compensatory measures
  • reimbursement
  • customer satisfaction
  • dispute resolution
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