The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017. Summarise it.
The graph demonstrates how many times different age groups visit emergency care in Northern Ireland, the data from December 2016 and December 2017 is compared.
Overall
, it is edvident
from the data that, the segments under 5 and over 75 were the most Correct your spelling
evident
friquent
users of the hospital. Correct your spelling
frequent
Also
, it is clear that
the number of visitors were
bigger in 2017.
It is Change the verb form
was
intersting
to note that there is a drastic difference between people with age Correct your spelling
interesting
from
65 to 74 and those who are older than 75 years. People over Change preposition
apply
75 year
Add a hyphen
75-year
attende
hospital for two times Correct your spelling
attended
attend
often
than every other Correct quantifier usage
more often
segement
except children under 5 years.
The middle segments are Correct your spelling
segment
opproximately
at the same number of attendances, in between 20 and 30 per 1000 population. Correct your spelling
approximately
Also
it is noticeable that teenagers has
the healthiest bodies, Change the verb form
have
hence
they are visiting hospital the least.Submitted by dyussenovaanel on
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