You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps demonstrate the previous development plan of the Central
Library
two
decades ago and the construction's current appearance.
In the middle of the plan diagram, there would be two
round tables surrounded by chairs in the lobby. As for the four corner
in the Change to a plural noun
corners
library
space, room
for CDs, videos and computer games, Correct article usage
a room
district
for children's Correct article usage
a district
books
, a reading room
containing newspapers and magazines and an enquiry desk with the function of booking tickets and returning books
are placed in a clockwise order from the north-western corner
.
By constrast
, as soon as enter Correct your spelling
contrast
in
the Change preposition
apply
library
from the entrance, the round tables are removed and there is a district
for all reference books
on the left hand
side Add a hyphen
left-hand
while
there is district
for adult fiction Add an article
the district
a district
books
, information
desk and three self-service machines on the right in the lobby hall nowadays. The Correct article usage
an information
district
for children's fiction books
and the events for storytelling is built on the north-western corner
with two
sofas equipped by the two
sides. A lecture room
is also
constructed on the north-eastern corner
. Moreover
, the reading room
has maken
way for the computer Correct your spelling
made
room
on the south-western corner
as well
as
the enquiry desk has varied Correct word choice
and
to
a cafe for readers to enjoy refreshments.
Change preposition
into
Overall
, nowadays, people are able to enjoy much
more functional facilities built in the Central Correct quantifier usage
many
Library
than the original plan which was made 20 years ago.Submitted by 1434110674 on
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, two, corner, room, district, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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