You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps demonstrate the previous development plan of the Central
Library
Use synonyms
two
decades ago and the construction's current appearance.
In the middle of the plan diagram, there would be Use synonyms
two
round tables surrounded by chairs in the lobby. As for the four Use synonyms
Use synonyms
corner
in the Change to a plural noun
corners
library
space, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
room
for CDs, videos and computer games, Correct article usage
a room
Use synonyms
district
for children's Correct article usage
a district
books
, a reading Use synonyms
room
containing newspapers and magazines and an enquiry desk with the function of booking tickets and returning Use synonyms
books
are placed in a clockwise order from the north-western Use synonyms
corner
.
By Use synonyms
constrast
, as soon as enter Correct your spelling
contrast
in
the Change preposition
apply
library
from the entrance, the round tables are removed and there is a Use synonyms
district
for all reference Use synonyms
books
on the Use synonyms
left hand
side Add a hyphen
left-hand
while
there is Linking Words
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district
for adult fiction Add an article
the district
a district
books
, Use synonyms
information
desk and three self-service machines on the right in the lobby hall nowadays. The Correct article usage
an information
district
for children's fiction Use synonyms
books
and the events for storytelling is built on the north-western Use synonyms
corner
with Use synonyms
two
sofas equipped by the Use synonyms
two
sides. A lecture Use synonyms
room
is Use synonyms
also
constructed on the north-eastern Linking Words
corner
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the reading Linking Words
room
has Use synonyms
maken
way for the computer Correct your spelling
made
room
on the south-western Use synonyms
corner
Use synonyms
as well
Linking Words
as
the enquiry desk has varied Correct word choice
and
to
a cafe for readers to enjoy refreshments.
Change preposition
into
Overall
, nowadays, people are able to enjoy Linking Words
much
more functional facilities built in the Central Correct quantifier usage
many
Library
than the original plan which was made 20 years ago.Use synonyms
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, two, corner, room, district, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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