The diagram details the process of making wool. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture shows the procedures by which

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is processed and transformed into

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a variety

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of products.  (

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)Looking from an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that processing

wool

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involves

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stages of preparation of the raw source material,

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stages constituting the production of tufts, and the final stages resulting in yarn and finished consumer products. First of all, the process begins when sheep

wool

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is sheared by machine,cleaned very well from any dirty and

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dried through dried machine. Subsequent to

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the raw product is spun

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according

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tools and

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either made into a string (with some being recycled as

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) or turned into

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.

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stage,the

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is form

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into tufts of

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and

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stored in the store. The

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steps involve turning the tufts into balls of yarn which can

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be used for knitting or for fabrication of consumer retail items

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as jackets and carpets.