The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates prices changing for copper, nickel and zinc in dynamic by months throughout
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2014 year.
Overall
, it is evident from the data that, the
price
for the nickel fluctuated the most.
While
, the
cooper's
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price
changed in the relatively small interval between 2 and -1
percentage
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. It is interesting to note that, after increasing
in
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at
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the beginning of the year, the growth for nickel started to rapidly decline.
At june
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In June
the
price
started to decrease, reaching the lowest point
on
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at
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-3
percentage
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.
However
,
at the end
of the given
period
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the
price
had a stable rise
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1
percent
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per cent
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in November and December. It is noticeable that
,
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the
price
for zinc in the first half of the period had
positive
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a positive
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trend,
however
at June there was a decrease in numbers.
On the other hand
,
the
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cooper's
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Cooper's
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cost almost always was over
neutral
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the neutral
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point, except
May
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in May
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and June.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Volatility
  • Trend
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Correlation
  • Economic factors
  • Speculate
  • Significant
  • Overall trend
  • Comparative analysis
  • Increase/decrease
  • Monthly change
  • Price movement
  • Stability/Instability
  • Speculative reasons
  • Global economic indicators
  • Commodities market
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Year-over-year analysis
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