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The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart demonstrates prices changing for copper, nickel and zinc in dynamic by months throughout
a
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2014 year.
Overall
, it is evident from the data that, the
price
 for the nickel fluctuated the most.
While
, the
cooper's
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price
 changed in the relatively small interval between 2 and -1
percentage
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per cent
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. It is interesting to note that, after increasing
in
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 the beginning of the year, the growth for nickel started to rapidly decline.
At june
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In June
 the
price
 started to decrease, reaching the lowest point
on
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 -3
percentage
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.
However
,
at the end
 of the given
period
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 the
price
 had a stable rise
on
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 1
percent
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per cent
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 in November and December. It is noticeable that
,
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 the
price
 for zinc in the first half of the period had
positive
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a positive
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 trend,
however
 at June there was a decrease in numbers.
On the other hand
,
the
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cooper's
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Cooper's
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 cost almost always was over
neutral
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the neutral
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 point, except
May
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in May
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 and June.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Volatility
  • Trend
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Correlation
  • Economic factors
  • Speculate
  • Significant
  • Overall trend
  • Comparative analysis
  • Increase/decrease
  • Monthly change
  • Price movement
  • Stability/Instability
  • Speculative reasons
  • Global economic indicators
  • Commodities market
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Year-over-year analysis
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