The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates prices changing for copper, nickel and zinc in dynamic by months throughout
a
2014 year.
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Overall
, it is evident from the data that, the Linking Words
price
for the nickel fluctuated the most. Use synonyms
While
, the Linking Words
cooper's
Capitalize word
Cooper's
price
changed in the relatively small interval between 2 and -1 Use synonyms
percentage
.
It is interesting to note that, after increasing Replace the word
per cent
in
the beginning of the year, the growth for nickel started to rapidly decline. Change the preposition
at
At june
the Correct your spelling
In June
price
started to decrease, reaching the lowest point Use synonyms
on
-3 Change preposition
at
percentage
. Replace the word
per cent
However
, Linking Words
at the end
of the given Linking Words
period
the Add a comma
period,
price
had a stable rise Use synonyms
on
1 Change preposition
of
percent
in November and December.
It is noticeable thatChange the spelling
per cent
,
the Remove the comma
apply
price
for zinc in the first half of the period had Use synonyms
positive
trend, Correct article usage
a positive
however
at June there was a decrease in numbers. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
the
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apply
cooper's
cost almost always was over Capitalize word
Cooper's
neutral
point, except Correct article usage
the neutral
May
and June.Change preposition
in May
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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