The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in births per 1000 women. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make com-parisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in births per 1000 women. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make com-parisons where relevant.
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The chart below gives information on the birth rate among women in England, from 1973 to 2020. The figures are measured in
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per 1000 women. A ‘canvas’ of birth rate demonstrates dramatic fall occurs in the aged 20-25 years
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, the
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as aged 28-34 shows stable and constant growth. The remaining two categories aged under 20 and 40+ respectively continue to exist on the starting
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throughout all periods of the survey. A huge gap was observed among the groups at the starting
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of the survey. Those, named as aged 20-25 soared at the top of the chart marked as 120 points,
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, the other three remained at the bottom indicating 20. A drastic decline from the starting
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demonstrated by ages 20-25 was stabled between 2008 and 2020 at level 20.
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20 aged 28-34
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demonstrates a constant rising rate till the finish and stops at 80 points level. Constantly remaining at the level 20
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under 20
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was demonstrated to barely see an increase at the endpoint. The same stability detected on the line to some degree under 20 points was demonstrated by the
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age 40+
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Vocabulary: Replace the words group, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Birth rate
  • Fluctuating trend
  • Economic factors
  • Family planning methods
  • Societal norms
  • Stabilization
  • Economic conditions
  • Fertility treatments
  • Demographic change
  • Maternal age
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