The given bar chart illustrates the ratio of household who lived in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
This
bar graph provides information regarding percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
household
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households
accodring
to contracting in England and Correct your spelling
according
wales
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Wales
form
1918 to 2011.
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from
To begin
with, the people
who lived in borrowing Correct quantifier usage
number of people
house
started at around 78% and decreased gradually, reaching nearly 31% in 2001. After that, its proportion experienced Fix the agreement mistake
houses
small
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a small
rising
to around 37%. Replace the word
rise
To the
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The
next,
the households in owning started at around 22% in 1918, and was on the
growth to around 65% with small fluctuations in 2011. To be specific, the two types of households met in 1971, reaching 50% respectively and experienced each Correct article usage
apply
variations
. Change to a singular noun
variation
Lastly
, the figure increased to appproximately
68 in 2001 and decreased by around 5% to around 43% in 2011.Correct your spelling
approximately
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