The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal berween 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
line
graph illustrates average
Carbon dioxide emissions by Correct article usage
the average
a
individual person in various European countries Change the article
an
about
40 years time Change preposition
for about
period
.
Overall
,the UK and Sweden
graphs are downtrend,while
Italy and Portugal graphs are uptrend.
In 1967,the United Kingdom was the highest CO2 emission country at almost 11 metric tonnes
and Sweden
was the second highest in
the list Change preposition
on
around
9 metric Change preposition
at around
tonnes
,which was double than
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that
Italy
(over 4 metric Change preposition
of Italy
tonnes
) and forth times bigger than Portugal.The UK carbon emission decreased gradually and
ended up at nearly 9 metric tonnes
.Sweden
graph decreased dramatically and closed under 6 metric Change noun form
Sweden's
tonnes
.
By contrast
,Italy's trend line
increased steadly
over the Correct your spelling
steadily
steady
period
of time and finished almost
8 metric Change preposition
at almost
tonnes
,which was nearly double than starting point.Moreover
,Italy finished the period
at
Change preposition
in
second
Change the article
the second
period
.Portugal started the journey with a
lowest point among the countries,but gradually increased Change the article
the
line
ended the journey near about 6 metric tonnes
along with
Sweden
's line
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