The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts figures from a survey in five towns in Australia about the consumption of
coffee
and tea
. There cities are Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisban, Adelaide, and Hobart. The legend shows fresh coffee
, instant
coffee
, and going to a cafe for coffee
or tea
, all in the last
4 weeks. The vertical axis shows buying and drinking habits in percentage. Overall
, it is observed almost the same patterns in all cities, except in Adelaide.
Bought fresh coffee
in the last
4 weeks is less often than instant
coffee
, and the last
is less frequent than going to a cafe for coffee
or tea
in Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisban, and Hobart, whereas
in Adelaide the most common is buying and drinking instant
coffee
.
Fresh coffee
and instant
coffee
present similar numbers in Sydney
and Melbourne
, with participation over 50%, while
in the other towns, this
percentage is always below 40%. The consumption in Melbourne
, Sydney
, and Hobart is over 60% the
habit of going to a cafe for either Change preposition
of the
tea
or coffee
.
Brisban is the city with the lowest consumption of fresh coffee
.Submitted by fmulato on
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