The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts figures from a survey in five towns in Australia about the consumption of
coffee
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and
tea
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. There cities are
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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, Brisban, Adelaide, and Hobart. The legend shows fresh
coffee
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,
instant
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coffee
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, and going to a cafe for
coffee
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or
tea
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, all in the
last
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4 weeks. The vertical axis shows buying and drinking habits in percentage.
Overall
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, it is observed almost the same patterns in all cities, except in Adelaide. Bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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4 weeks is less often than
instant
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coffee
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, and the
last
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is less frequent than going to a cafe for
coffee
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or
tea
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in
Sydney
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,
Melbourne
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, Brisban, and Hobart,
whereas
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in Adelaide the most common is buying and drinking
instant
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coffee
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. Fresh
coffee
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and
instant
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coffee
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present similar numbers in
Sydney
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and
Melbourne
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, with participation over 50%,
while
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in the other towns,
this
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percentage is always below 40%. The consumption in
Melbourne
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,
Sydney
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, and Hobart is over 60%
the
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of the
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habit of going to a cafe for either
tea
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or
coffee
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. Brisban is the city with the lowest consumption of fresh
coffee
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, sydney, melbourne, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee consumption
  • tea consumption
  • shopping habits
  • demographic factors
  • preference trends
  • price sensitivity
  • convenience
  • per capita
  • restaurateurs
  • beverage industry
  • consumer behavior
  • market analysis
  • quantitative data
  • qualitative analysis
  • trend analysis
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • seasonal variations
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