The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph depicts figures from a survey in five towns in Australia about the consumption of
coffee
and Use synonyms
tea
. There cities are Use synonyms
Sydney
, Use synonyms
Melbourne
, Brisban, Adelaide, and Hobart. The legend shows fresh Use synonyms
coffee
, Use synonyms
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
, and going to a cafe for Use synonyms
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
, all in the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks. The vertical axis shows buying and drinking habits in percentage. Linking Words
Overall
, it is observed almost the same patterns in all cities, except in Adelaide.
Bought fresh Linking Words
coffee
in the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks is less often than Linking Words
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
, and the Use synonyms
last
is less frequent than going to a cafe for Linking Words
coffee
or Use synonyms
tea
in Use synonyms
Sydney
, Use synonyms
Melbourne
, Brisban, and Hobart, Use synonyms
whereas
in Adelaide the most common is buying and drinking Linking Words
instant
Use synonyms
coffee
.
Fresh Use synonyms
coffee
and Use synonyms
instant
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coffee
present similar numbers in Use synonyms
Sydney
and Use synonyms
Melbourne
, with participation over 50%, Use synonyms
while
in the other towns, Linking Words
this
percentage is always below 40%. The consumption in Linking Words
Melbourne
, Use synonyms
Sydney
, and Hobart is over 60% Use synonyms
the
habit of going to a cafe for either Change preposition
of the
tea
or Use synonyms
coffee
.
Brisban is the city with the lowest consumption of fresh Use synonyms
coffee
.Use synonyms
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