The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram describes the way in which electricity
produced
by geothermal energy in Add a missing verb
was produced
the
geothermal power plants in past.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, the process consists of five stages, beginning with the cold Linking Words
water
and ending Use synonyms
up
with the generator and Change preposition
apply
turbine
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, cold Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
pumped
down for Add a missing verb
is pumped
4.5
km distance until Correct article usage
a 4.5
reach
the injection well. Correct subject-verb agreement
reaches
Then
, cold Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
transferred
to the geothermal zone or hot racks in order to get hot Add a missing verb
is transferred
water
. Use synonyms
Next,
at the production well stage, hot Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
pumped
up to the condenser which is on the ground.
In the next stage, hot Add a missing verb
is pumped
water
transformed Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
into
the
steam in the Condenser. Correct article usage
apply
Following
Linking Words
this
,steam went to the Linking Words
Turbine
by some Use synonyms
chanelle
.After that steam Correct your spelling
channel
make
power for Change the verb form
makes
Use synonyms
turbine
to work properly.
Add an article
the turbine
a turbine
Finally
, Linking Words
generator
which Correct article usage
the generator
powered
by Add a missing verb
is powered
Use synonyms
turbine
Correct article usage
a turbine
produce
electricity.Change the verb form
produces
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