The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The diagram describes the way in which electricity

produced

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was produced

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by geothermal energy in

the

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apply

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geothermal power plants in past.

Overall

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, the process consists of five stages, beginning with the cold

water

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and ending

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apply

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with the generator and

turbine

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Firstly

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, cold

water

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pumped

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is pumped

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down for

4.5

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a 4.5

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km distance until

reach

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reaches

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the injection well.

Then

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, cold

water

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transferred

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is transferred

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to the geothermal zone or hot racks in order to get hot

water

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Next,

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at the production well stage, hot

water

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pumped

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is pumped

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up to the condenser which is on the ground. In the next stage, hot

water

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transformed

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into

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the

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apply

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steam in the Condenser.

Following

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this

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,steam went to the

Turbine

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by some

chanelle

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channel

.After that steam

make

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makes

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power for

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turbine

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the turbine

a turbine

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to work properly.

Finally

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generator

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the generator

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which

powered

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is powered

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turbine

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a turbine

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produce

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produces

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electricity.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, turbine with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

127 words

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their childen to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.