The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The diagram describes the way in which electricity

produced

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by geothermal energy in

the

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geothermal power plants in past.

Overall

, the process consists of five stages, beginning with the cold

water

and ending

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with the generator and

turbine

Firstly

, cold

water

pumped

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is pumped

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down for

4.5

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a 4.5

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km distance until

reach

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the injection well.

Then

, cold

water

transferred

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is transferred

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to the geothermal zone or hot racks in order to get hot

water

Next,

at the production well stage, hot

water

pumped

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is pumped

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up to the condenser which is on the ground. In the next stage, hot

water

transformed

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the

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steam in the Condenser.

Following

this

,steam went to the

Turbine

by some

chanelle

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channel

.After that steam

make

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power for

turbine

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the turbine

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to work properly.

Finally

generator

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the generator

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which

powered

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is powered

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turbine

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a turbine

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produce

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produces

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electricity.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

127 words

4.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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