The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The diagram describes the way in which electricity
produced
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was produced
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by geothermal energy in
the
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geothermal power plants in past.
Overall
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, the process consists of five stages, beginning with the cold
water
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and ending
up
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with the generator and
turbine
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.
Firstly
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, cold
water
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pumped
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is pumped
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down for
4.5
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a 4.5
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km distance until
reach
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the injection well.
Then
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, cold
water
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transferred
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is transferred
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to the geothermal zone or hot racks in order to get hot
water
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.
Next,
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at the production well stage, hot
water
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pumped
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up to the condenser which is on the ground. In the next stage, hot
water
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transformed
to
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the
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steam in the Condenser.
Following
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this
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,steam went to the
Turbine
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by some
chanelle
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channel
.After that steam
make
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power for
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turbine
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the turbine
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to work properly.
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,
generator
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the generator
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which
powered
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is powered
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by
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turbine
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a turbine
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produce
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produces
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electricity.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, turbine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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