The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to and from
UK
from 1979 to 1999.Correct article usage
the UK
While
the bar chart demonstrates the popularity of the figure of UK
residents
Correct pronoun usage
who traveled
traveled
to five countries in 1999.Units are measured in millions.
Change the spelling
travelled
Overall
, there was an increase in the number of visits to and from the UK
and there were more visits abroad by UK
residents
than visits to the UK
by overseas residents
over the period given. Furthermore
, the most popular country to visit by UK
residents
was France in 1999.
The number of UK
residents
visiting overseas began at just under 15 million
in 1979 and rose significantly to reach over 50 million
in 1999. Around 10 million
overseas residents
visited the UK
in the first year before climbing steadily to just under 30 million
by the final year.
In 1999, France was visited by over 10 million
UK
residents
, followed by Spain at about 9 million
. The USA and Greece had about 4 million
and 3 million
visitors respectively. The least popular country visited was Turkey which had only about 2 million
UK
residents
going there.Submitted by s_syedy on
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