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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to and from
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UK
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the UK
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 from 1979 to 1999.
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 the bar chart demonstrates the popularity of the figure of
UK
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residents
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who traveled
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traveled
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travelled
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 to five countries in 1999.Units are measured in millions. 　　
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, there was an increase in the number of visits to and from the
UK
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 and there were more visits abroad by
UK
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residents
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 than visits to the
UK
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 by overseas
residents
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 over the period given.
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, the most popular country to visit by
UK
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residents
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 was France in 1999. 　　 The number of
UK
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residents
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 visiting overseas began at just under 15
million
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 in 1979 and rose significantly to reach over 50
million
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 in 1999. Around 10
million
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 overseas
residents
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 visited the
UK
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 in the first year before climbing steadily to just under 30
million
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 by the final year. 　　 In 1999, France was visited by over 10
million
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UK
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residents
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, followed by Spain at about 9
million
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. The USA and Greece had about 4
million
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 and 3
million
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 visitors respectively. The least popular country visited was Turkey which had only about 2
million
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UK
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residents
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 going there.
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