The given bar chart illustrates the ratio of household who lived in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
The data shows the proportion of families owning and renting in England and Wales
in
1918 until 2011. Change preposition
from
Overall
, it demonstrated that rentals were very common at the start of the period which gradually decreased overtime
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over time
while
on the other hand
, owning a house were
not as popular in 1918 but rose steadily throughout the Change the verb form
was
years
.
In 1918, rented accomodations
were common with families which was over a quarter compared to families who are able to buy a place at 77%. Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
However
, over the next 25 years
it showed a drop Add a comma
years,
almost
10% which continued until 2001 Change preposition
of almost
then
grew minimally in 2011 at more or less 35%.
In contrast
, owning a house was not very popular among the population which stood at 22% in
the start of the period. Change preposition
at
However
, it increased steadily and levelled with lease houses in 1971 at 50%. After 10 years
, buying a house overtook rentals by an
growth of 10% with a 20% difference and the gap Change the article
a
of
the two just got bigger ten Change preposition
between
years
after and peaked at
2021 Change preposition
in
by
69% of the Change preposition
with
houseld
getting their own place. Noticeable, there was a slight dip in 2011 by around 5% but still Correct your spelling
households
exceed
the household who Wrong verb form
exceeded
are
have rented Unnecessary verb
apply
accomodations
.Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
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