The given bar chart illustrates the ratio of household who lived in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

The data shows the proportion of families owning and renting in England and Wales

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1918 until 2011.

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, it demonstrated that rentals were very common at the start of the period which gradually decreased

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over time

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while

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on the other hand

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, owning a house

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not as popular in 1918 but rose steadily throughout the

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. In 1918, rented

accomodations

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accommodations

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were common with families which was over a quarter compared to families who are able to buy a place at 77%.

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, over the next 25

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years

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it showed a drop

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10% which continued until 2001

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grew minimally in 2011 at more or less 35%.

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, owning a house was not very popular among the population which stood at 22%

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the start of the period.

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, it increased steadily and levelled with lease houses in 1971 at 50%. After 10

years

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, buying a house overtook rentals by

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growth of 10% with a 20% difference and the gap

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the two just got bigger ten

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after and peaked

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2021

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69% of the

houseld

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households

getting their own place. Noticeable, there was a slight dip in 2011 by around 5% but still

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the household who

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have rented

accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

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