The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
coffee
-and-tea buying and drinking preferences of
people
in five Australian cities. It compares the proportion of residents who brought fresh or
instant
coffee
, and those who went to the cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
4 weeks.
It is clear that
most
people
choose a more convenient way of
drink
,
such
as going to a cafe or buying
instant
coffee
instead
of making their own
drink
(fresh
coffee
).
According to
the chart, over 60% of inhabitants in Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney went to cafes for
coffee
or tea and around 55% in Brisbane. These numbers are much higher than those of buying fresh or
instant
coffee
. Adelaide is an exception with slightly less than
half
of its
people
going
half
,
also
one or two per cent lower than buying
instant
coffee
. Among those who bought
coffee
, around
half
(45% - 55%) of
people
in the cities bought
instant
coffee
.
In contrast
, fewer
people
brought fresh
coffee
though the different variability: the proportion in Sydney and Melbourne was almost the same as the figure for those who brought
instant
coffee
while
only
half
as many
people
drink
fresh
coffee
as
people
drink
instant
coffee
r in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee consumption
  • tea consumption
  • shopping habits
  • demographic factors
  • preference trends
  • price sensitivity
  • convenience
  • per capita
  • restaurateurs
  • beverage industry
  • consumer behavior
  • market analysis
  • quantitative data
  • qualitative analysis
  • trend analysis
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • seasonal variations
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