The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart provides
outcome
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the outcome
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of a questionnaire on purchasing and drinking
pattern
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patterns
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of
coffee
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and
tee
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tea
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among five major Australian cities.
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,
went
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to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea was the most popular in all cities except in Adelaide, where brought instant
coffee
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was preferable. Brought fresh
coffee
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was the least selected item in all five places. Bought fresh
coffee
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, was
in
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the first of the priority list for the people of Sydney, which was just under 45%
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followed by Melbourne and Hobart, around 42% and 38% respectively.
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popularity was almost similar, in Brisbane and Adelaide. Bought instant
coffee
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was preferred by slightly less than 55%
citizens
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of citizens
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of Hobart, which was
highest
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the highest
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for
this
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item. Brisbane, Adelaide and Melbourne were
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second
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in second
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, third and fourth position respectively. Sydney was the least popular for
this
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type of habit, which was just above 45%. Went to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea was chosen mostly by Melbourne people, almost 65%.
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number varied between almost 50% to 62% in
other
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the other
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four cities.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee consumption
  • tea consumption
  • shopping habits
  • demographic factors
  • preference trends
  • price sensitivity
  • convenience
  • per capita
  • restaurateurs
  • beverage industry
  • consumer behavior
  • market analysis
  • quantitative data
  • qualitative analysis
  • trend analysis
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • seasonal variations
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