Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms and sport clubs,believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work.Other employees see no benifit in doing so.

It has been known that investing in

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health is

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productivity

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the productivity

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of work. I believe companies

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do not support paying for

spots

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clubs are investing in major aspects.

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, others, find it progressively important to combine working out within

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environment. I will endeavour to discuss it

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that the level of productivity required from the staff members must come from the daily life of a person in the first place. What I mean by that, is the institution is paying salaries and

in addition

some reasonable

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and achieving allowances to outstanding

employees

.

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, leaders can offer a challenge to invite all staff to go to the gymnasium,

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a study has been conducted at Harvard University that

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very few numbers of

employees

admitted that

this

physical exercise policy is unreasonable and they take leave on that day.

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there are many positive activities to boos the motivation in workplace,

such

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, rewards,

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relocation trip could deliver

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positive effect.

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point of view that applying

sport

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activities is fundamental

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workplace

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been approved by scientific research for the

last

few decades, that companies that implement clubs and sports memberships are producing more and the level of competition is peaking yearly.

For instance

, in China and

Japan

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the governments

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employees

to practice exercise during

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working hours and there is

medical

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checkup every month, where the results were 92% no illness among the staff

this

is extremely satisfying. The idea is to maintain the

sport

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spirit and have fun activities to motivate the members to stay fit and

remain

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a healthy lifestyle

while

working

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. In conclusion, investing in sports and health is priceless and quite beneficial for

human

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in

workforce

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and in daily life.