The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph presented depicts the amount of
goods
transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 by four distinct modes of transport.
It is clear that
in the first of the years the majority of goods
transported by road
while
pipeline
had less transported goods
in the UK.
In 1974, about 70 million
tonnes
of goods
were moved by road
however
, just approximately 5 million
tonnes
of stuff were transported by pipeline
. Also
, the water
and rail
statistics in this
period were almost equal to 40 million
tonnes
. Following
this
, in 1978 the road
and pipeline
transported increased slightly and reached about 75 and 10 respectively. In contrast
, the water
and rail
transported remained unchanged.
In 1982, the water
transported rose significantly and reached almost 55 million
tonnes
, on the other hand
, the rail
transported decreased dramatically and reached about 25. The pipeline
transported continued to increase and reached 15. While
,
the Remove the comma
apply
road
transported experienced a slight decline after
this
increased significantly and reached more than 80 in 1992 with a slight decline in 1994 raised moderately in 2002 and reached near 100 million
tonnes
. The pipeline
transported during the years increased slightly until reached about 20 million
tonnes
in 2002.
The rail
transported experienced fluctuation and at least reached 40 million
tonnes
. However
, the water
transported after remained stable for 20 years was witnessed increase
considerably in 2002.Correct article usage
an increase
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