In many societies, pollution is a subject of debate, with some arguing that it poses significant negative impacts on communities, while others suggest that it can bring benefits, particularly in terms of governmental authority. In your opinion, do the negative consequences of pollution outweigh any potential benefits? Provide reasons and examples to support your viewpoint.
society from the un-hygiene of the sanitary. When the sanitary contaminated by
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water
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polution
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pollution
it makes the water become
toxicity
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consume.
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, the major
dease
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disease
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come
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through
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bad activity is
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.
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village
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in Jogjakarta suffered
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diarrhea
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diarrhoea
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deases
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diseases
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disease
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Introduction and Conclusion
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Supported Main Points
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Introduction and Conclusion
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Grammar and Spelling
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Complete Response
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Clear and Comprehensive Ideas
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
In today’s high-technology generation, with the development of various delivery vehicles, there are many forms of transportation around the world. People can either drive their own vehicles on roads or use public transportation. Railways, in particular, can transport people over long distances and carry a large number of passengers. While driving provides individuals with freedom, I believe that governments should invest more in railways than in roads.
My name is Kulbeer Kaur Bal residing in Aniruddha apartment, building number 33, room number 5, 5th floor, Ulwe, 410206. In the letter, I wanted to inform you that there is a pothole in front of our society gate.
First and foremost, let me, please, to express to you my sincere greats for your service for the members. I have the library membership more than 4 years, and I have to say, our library is the best I saw ever. The environment in the library is very calm and quiet, you have all the new bestsellers that I only can dream to read. Moreover, you have the pretty toddlers inside ground, which gets for the young coupls the possibility to continue their learning. But I think, that there should be more distance from the sofas' corner to playground, because sometimes it's a little bit noisy.
Some individuals hold the belief that securing a job is best ensured through attaining a university degree, while others suggest that it may be more beneficial to prioritize gaining hands-on experience beforehand. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.
Some people argue that there should be longer weekends and shorter working weeks. I totally disagree with this statement. I believe that the proposed time repartition between worktime and days off could demoralise workers as well as reduce their productivity and impact negatively in the overall economic situation in the world.