The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the way of recycling glass. In short, there are several steps from collecting
bins
to renewing and Use synonyms
finally
Linking Words
that
Correct word choice
apply
it
will be used as Correct pronoun usage
apply
bins
again.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, people should trash glass Linking Words
bins
to certain places to recycle them. After that, the Use synonyms
bins
are transported to the treatment plant by track. At the treatment plant, they are put into a washing and sterilising machine Use synonyms
Linking Words
firstly
, where they can be completely clean. Surprisingly, the cleaned Change the word
first
bins
are not reused as bottles as they are after cleaning. It is crushed and melted in a machine at the next step. Following that, the Use synonyms
melt
glass is poured into a mold machine and Replace the word
melted
took
some time to be solid perfectly. At Wrong verb form
takes
this
stage, they are remolded as Linking Words
bins
again, and Use synonyms
after
Linking Words
this
, they Linking Words
Linking Words
finally
ready to ship Add a missing verb
are finally
for
supermarkets and will be used as bottles which Change preposition
to
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
container
of various drinks again.Fix the agreement mistake
containers
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bins with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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