The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram below illustrates the steps and types of equipment
such
as grinders and crushers needed in the cement-making process, Linking Words
moreover
, it shows how concrete is produced using the mentioned process for building purposes.
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To begin
with, the left picture is cement production as commonly seen, Linking Words
firstly
, limestone and clay are crushed together as powder, Linking Words
then
, the powder goes through the mixer and the rotating heater to get the heat totally, and Linking Words
next,
when it is already hot, it is pulverized thoroughly and eventually turns into the needed material contained in bags.
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Furthermore
, the right picture shows concrete production, the material produced before is filled in the mixer with other mashes either water, sand or gravel which is usually described as small stones and most ingredients, after that, it is mixed in the machine for a Linking Words
while
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finally
, the concrete is available.
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Overall
, the stages of making cement and concrete do not seem difficult in spite of the several admixtures, Linking Words
besides
that, the material is the infrastructure of lots of buildings and inventions amongst the workers.Linking Words
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