Q. Some people think its better to have friends that have same opinion, while others belive it is good having friends who sometimes have different opinion. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Friends
are one of the greatest asset to everyone. Despite being friends
who have same
opinion some say it is better to have Change the article
the same
friends
with different opinion
which will always be a Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
never ending
debate. Can anyone deny that having Add a hyphen
never-ending
friends
with different opinion
will lead to Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
us
a new idea of looking into a problem and help us mentally for anything to come?
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friend
will always be there throughout your tough times. Although
like minded
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like-minded
friends
share their common thoughts in an identical manner, it does not help all the time, to
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problems or Correct your spelling
certain
in
situations, we need to think out of the box. To illustrate, me and my Change preposition
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friend
got caught in a quarrel with a stranger on
the bus stop who Change preposition
at
was having
a different Wrong verb form
had
opnion
about a series which we recently watched and we both shared the same idea about the show. Correct your spelling
opinion
In addition
, at certain
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a certain
of
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in
time
there will not be any growth in the relationship between Add a comma
time,
same minded
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same-minded
friends
, as this
affects the bonding as well in
a prolonged period of time.
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On the other hand
, friends
with different perception
of seeing things Fix the agreement mistake
perceptions
is
a must in a person's life. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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the divergent Correct your spelling
In fact
friends
does
not get along well but their thought process helps in many ways to come out of Change the verb form
do
a
difficult circumstances. Correct the article-noun agreement
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For instance
, a work friend
of mine had a different approach towards a sales pitch which was creative
and unique than my idea. Correct quantifier usage
more creative
Apart from
this
, the
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discrete minded
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discrete-minded
friends
often help each others
mentally when one person is upset about Change to a singular noun
other
a
repercussions or Correct article usage
the
a
loss of something or Correct article usage
the
somone
, they help us overcome these Correct your spelling
someone
situaltions
by supporting each other and staying positive.
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situations
To conclude
, friends
are the backbone of one person. I strongly beleive
that, having a Correct your spelling
believe
contrast minded
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contrast-minded
friend
helps us to look into a problem from different
perspective and boost our Add an article
a different
mentall
health to stay positive.Correct your spelling
mental
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
Fully address the prompt by discussing both viewpoints with equal depth and clarity before providing a well-defined personal stance in the conclusion.
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Your opinion
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