Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?
Nowadays, many people are struggling with their
jobs
because they do not like it or do not have enough talent to apply for better organizations or just have more valuable Use synonyms
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jobs
. Respectively, in our time we have so many workers who do not like their job.
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have a really huge influence on their Use synonyms
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about their future majors, Use synonyms
jobs
etc. In my opinion, Use synonyms
children
or guys who are already 18 years old may decide on their own because it is their own life and maybe they want to live it in another way. Use synonyms
For instance
, I have a best friend and his mother always trying to make decisions Linking Words
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Consequently
, after these rivals and argues with his mother he feels bad and disappointed. As Linking Words
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know, he really likes horse riding but his mother makes him Change the capitalization
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On the other hand
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have so much laziness and just want to have a large amount of money. But Change to a plural noun
communities
this
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the nation
a nation
nation
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work
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their
goals, probably, they should make some aims in Correct pronoun usage
its
direction
of what they want and try to break the walls and reach them. Correct article usage
the direction
For example
, I used to speak with an interesting person when I was living in Spain. He had a really substantial amount of money, a lot of cars, and houses. The only thing that he said - was hard Linking Words
work
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To sum up
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parents
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life of their Correct article usage
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children
, in my opinion, they can only give them a piece of advice. Use synonyms
Moreover
, people should break the rules and system to reach and have a dream job.Linking Words
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