he graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The percentage of the population in four Asian countries Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia, who have been living in cities from 1970 to 2020, and the anticipated proportion that will be living in the years 2030 and 2040 is illustrated in the graph below.

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, a massive boost in the ratio of urban settled individuals has occurred since the year 2020 and is anticipated for the future in all 4 countries. In the Philippines, starting at around 30% in 1970, after a slight increase by 1980, a massive growth to just below 50% is shown, with a gradual

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to around 43% in 2020, after that, a consistent increase to around 60 per cent in 2040. In Thailand, from just below 20% in 1970, the gradual rise to around 45 per cent by the year 2040 can be seen, but from 1990 to 2020, there is pretty much no remarkable increase in the percentage but it goes back to the normal pattern from 2020.

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he graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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