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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The table depicts the water cost in Austria in five cities. Clearly, there is
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 highest value of water
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 in Perth with an average of $332 for each house and a dominant difference in payment for each kiloliter. In Perth, it costs $0.42 and $1.50 for the lower and upper than 125 KL, respectively. The
overall
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 cash for each home was $332. The next town was Sydney with an average of $319 for each family
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constant purchase of $0.98 for each used water quantity.
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, the lowest in Austria was Melbourne with a steady number of money ($0.78) and an average of $253.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cost
  • water consumption
  • billing method
  • variation
  • historical trends
  • outlier
  • price range
  • anomalies
  • regional factor
  • summarise
  • identify
  • compare
  • expensive
  • least expensive
  • main features
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