You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The presented line
graph
illustrates the data about the number of visitors
visiting a museum
in several seasons in 2003.
Overall
,it is shown that the whole year people
visit the museum
,however
,during summer time
people
visit the museum
more than in wintertime.
On the one hand,in the sunny season,after starting the museum
people
went there and in the range of 1100-1200, time
period people
's attendance was dramatically high at more 1400,which was the highest in the total graph
.People
's participation went down to 800 before time
went to 1600.After that,the graph
went through a sharp fall and reached 0 audiences in closing time
(1800).
On the other hand
,in the winter season,after opening the museum
visitors
went there and between 1100-1200 time
individuals number reached its peak at 600,which was half of summertime
Add an article
the summertime
visitors
in that given time
.After that, the graph
saw a significant fall and reached 0 visitors
in 1400 time
period.Time
between 1500-1800 no visitors
were there.Submitted by ashraftaukir on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, visitors, museum, people, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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