The graph below shows UK air pollutants in millions of tons, from three different sources, between 1990 and 2005.
The graph shows the decreasing trend in total
air
pollution
sources in the UK from 1990 to 2005.
The main dercease
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decrease
air
pollution
source is industry. It is found that industry air
pollution
source
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sources
decrease
from between 6 to 8 million Wrong verb form
decreased
tornes
in 1990 to around 2 million Correct your spelling
tonnes
tornes
in 2005.
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tonnes
However
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pollution
source
from Fix the agreement mistake
sources
household
just drop a little bit. It has not a significant drop from 1990 to 2005. In terms of transportation, it Fix the agreement mistake
households
maintain
a stable trend from 1990 to 2005. It has not any obvious change.
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maintains
Overall
, most air
pollution
sources are
decreased compared with 1990. The total Verb problem
have
air
pollution
sources show decreasing
trend.Add an article
a decreasing
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