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This bar chart represents the water use given in percentage in a number of different regions in 1995.

This bar chart represents the water use given in percentage in a number of different regions in 1995.
The column chart illustrates the proportion of
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water
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use
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 in three different sectors in five countries in the year 1995.
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, in Africa,
water
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 was more extensively used in agriculture,
whereas
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 the
water
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use
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 in the industry
sector
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 was the smallest
amount
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.
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, the figures for
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water
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use
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 in the industry
sector
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 in Europe and North America were more than that
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 agricultural purposes. As for
agricultural
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the agricultural
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sector
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, the proportion of
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water
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use
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 in Africa was the largest
amount
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 at 85%.
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, Europe had the least
amount
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 of
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water
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use
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 in
this
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sector
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 with nearly 35%. On the industrial side, the
water
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use
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 in Europe was the highest at just over 50%. In Asia and Latin America,
water
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 was equally consumed in industry at 10%. With regard to the domestic
use
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 of
water
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, Asia had the lowest percentage at well under 10%,
whereas
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 Latin America consumed more
amount
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 of
water
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 in
this
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sector
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 with approximately 20%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, sector, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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