The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India’s gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart shows different sectors (
agriculture
,
industry
,
services
) that impacted India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, it is noteworthy that the contribution of
Services
increased gradually
while
the rate of
Industry
declined throughout the given period. At the beginning of the period, the effect of
agriculture
overpowered the three fields.
This
figure
was recorded at above 60. The
industry
and
services
recorded less than 20. After 20 years,
although
the
figure
for
agriculture
had a steady decrease, it still greatly affected GDP among the three sectors. The
figure
for
Industry
and
Services
figured at about 25 and 28,
repectively
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respectively
.
However
, the rate for
services
recorded the most significant impact on GDP over 40 in 1990. The
industry
had almost no change after 1980, recording approximately 25.
At the end
of the period, the service
figure
peaked at 60
while
the rate for
agriculture
fell to just above 10.
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