The chart below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figures.

The chart below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figures.
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The spreadsheet compares the wages of state educational
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tutors in 2009. What stands out from the table is that lecturers from
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received the highest
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, ranking
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whereas
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the teachers from the rest of the countries obtained significantly less.
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, the duration of possessing the increased
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was long for
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, Japan,
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. As mentioned,
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occupied the leading position, paying workers of academic institutions 80,000 at the beginning of their careers.
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was not true for Australia and Korea owing to the fact that those nations gave less
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to teachers, just 28,000 and 30,000, respectively. Teachers from Denmark and Japan received almost similar amounts of
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, with 45,000 and 34,000, respectively. When it comes to the
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of getting a greater
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, for lecturers from Australia and Denmark, there was no need to wait for long;
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, it was less than 10 years,
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educators from
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, Japan, and Korea had been waiting for over 30 years.
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