The graph shows the rate of smoking among men and women in Somaliland

The graph shows the rate of smoking among men and women in Somaliland
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the rate of smoking among men and women in Somaliland
The line graph illustrates the amount of people who smoke in Somaliland from 1960 to 2000 a
period
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of 40
years
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. It can be seen that the most smokers were men
while
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women
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were the least smokers during these 40
years
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. Though the number of men who smoke decreased significantly,
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rate increased among
women
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at the end
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of the
period
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. In 1960, 600000 men were addicted to smoking but
this
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trend had a remarkable drop during 40
years
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and stood at approximately 210000 in 2000.
On the other hand
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,
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trend in
women
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showed a fluctuation during these
years
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, the number of smoking
women
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was very small at less than 100000.
Although
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it had a dramatic rise to around 200000 in just 5
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(1970).
Then
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leaped to more than 300000 in 1975.
This
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number remained almost steady until 1990
then
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slightly sank to 200000 by the end of the
period
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, years, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • disparity
  • trends
  • cultural factors
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • comparative analysis
  • awareness campaigns
  • health implications
  • interventions
  • correlation
  • lifestyle choices
  • health behaviors
  • significantly
  • narrowing
  • widening
  • impact
  • influencing
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