The line graph shows Paris Metro station Passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station Passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates the
number
of people using a metro station in Paris. The
number
of passengers rises sharply in the morning, reaching a peak of 400 at 8 am. After the morning peak, there is a steady drop to 300 at 9 am and less than 200 at 10 am. Between 10 am and 11 am, there is a slight increase. The
number
plateaus just below 300 between 12 noon and 2
pm
. In the afternoon, there is a decline in the
number
of citizens using the station to just 80 at 4
pm
. The evening shows a significant increase from 200 at 5
pm
. to almost 400 at 6
pm
. The
number
of passengers tapers off slightly after 6
pm
but falls quickly to 120 by 8
pm
. After a slight rise at 9
pm
, the
number
tails off to 120 at 10
pm
.
Overall
, it is seen that the time series shows that the greatest
number
of passengers gather at the station early in the morning and
also
early in the evening.
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