You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph illustrates
the
information about the Correct article usage
apply
sales
of four different categories of digital games
(including mobile phone games
, online games
, console games
and handheld games
) in Correct article usage
the glob
glob
from 2000 and 2006.
Correct your spelling
globe
Overall
,X made with years
and y made sales
in billions of dollars.There was significant
upward trend Add an article
a significant
by
handheld Change preposition
for
games
and other
three Correct article usage
the other
games
represented lowest
percentages than which Correct article usage
the lowest
game
.However
, end of the period more online game
sales
improve
and console Wrong verb form
improved
game
sales
dropped.
According to
the graph, the beginning of handheld games
sale
accounted Fix the agreement mistake
sales
nearly
10 billion Change preposition
for nearly
dollar
.Following that gradually increased.From 2003 to 2005 it remained Change to a plural noun
dollars
same
around 15 proportion.Correct article usage
the same
Furthermore
end of the period it reached highest
approximately 17 Correct pronoun usage
its highest
dollar
in 2006.
Change to a plural noun
dollars
Moreover
, console game
sales
exactly
6 in 2000.Add a missing verb
were exactly
Then
moderately decreased last
two years
and end of year
which was roughly 3.Add an article
the year
Hense
, there Correct your spelling
Hence
was
not any mobile phone Correct subject-verb agreement
were
game
sales
and
console Correct word choice
or
game
sales
in first
two Correct article usage
the first
years
.Tiny
amount contributed Correct article usage
A tiny
online
Change preposition
to online
games
by 2001.Additionally
grew and represented considerable
amount in 2006 by around 10 billion Add an article
a considerable
dollar
. Mobile Change to a plural noun
dollars
phone
and online Fix the agreement mistake
phones
games
accounted under
6 Change preposition
for under
dollar
Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
sales
between 2001 to 2005 Change preposition
in sales
years
.After 2006 it was changed over the 6 dollar
sales
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, games, years, game, dollar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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