The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates
the
information about the Correct article usage
apply
sales
of four different categories of digital Use synonyms
games
(including mobile phone Use synonyms
games
, online Use synonyms
games
, console Use synonyms
games
and handheld Use synonyms
games
) in Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the glob
glob
from 2000 and 2006.
Correct your spelling
globe
Overall
,X made with Linking Words
years
and y made Use synonyms
sales
in billions of dollars.There was Use synonyms
significant
upward trend Add an article
a significant
by
handheld Change preposition
for
games
and Use synonyms
other
three Correct article usage
the other
games
represented Use synonyms
lowest
percentages than which Correct article usage
the lowest
game
.Use synonyms
However
, end of the period more online Linking Words
game
Use synonyms
sales
Use synonyms
improve
and console Wrong verb form
improved
game
Use synonyms
sales
dropped.
Use synonyms
According to
the graph, the beginning of handheld Linking Words
games
Use synonyms
sale
accounted Fix the agreement mistake
sales
nearly
10 billion Change preposition
for nearly
Use synonyms
dollar
.Following that gradually increased.From 2003 to 2005 it remained Change to a plural noun
dollars
same
around 15 proportion.Correct article usage
the same
Furthermore
end of the period it reached Linking Words
highest
approximately 17 Correct pronoun usage
its highest
Use synonyms
dollar
in 2006.
Change to a plural noun
dollars
Moreover
, console Linking Words
game
Use synonyms
sales
Use synonyms
exactly
6 in 2000.Add a missing verb
were exactly
Then
moderately decreased Linking Words
last
two Linking Words
years
and end of Use synonyms
year
which was roughly 3.Add an article
the year
Hense
, there Correct your spelling
Hence
was
not any mobile phone Correct subject-verb agreement
were
game
Use synonyms
sales
Use synonyms
and
console Correct word choice
or
game
Use synonyms
sales
in Use synonyms
first
two Correct article usage
the first
years
.Use synonyms
Tiny
amount contributed Correct article usage
A tiny
online
Change preposition
to online
games
by 2001.Use synonyms
Additionally
grew and represented Linking Words
considerable
amount in 2006 by around 10 billion Add an article
a considerable
Use synonyms
dollar
. Mobile Change to a plural noun
dollars
phone
and online Fix the agreement mistake
phones
games
accounted Use synonyms
under
6 Change preposition
for under
Use synonyms
dollar
Fix the agreement mistake
dollars
Use synonyms
sales
between 2001 to 2005 Change preposition
in sales
years
.After 2006 it was changed over the 6 Use synonyms
dollar
Use synonyms
sales
.Use synonyms
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