The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The flow chart illustrates the impact of logging. In
this
flow Linking Words
chart
you can see that deforestation is divided into four directions “heavy logging equipment”, “fewer roots hold”, “increased risk of burnings” and “plants return less moisture to air”.
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chart,
Firstly
, you can see that heavy logging equipment causes soil Linking Words
move
hard and Add the particle
to move
backed
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back
subsequently
, and because of Linking Words
this
, rainwater drains and creates flooding.
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Next,
the accompanying consequence of logging is that there are fewer roots to hold together. Leading to soil erosion.
The third effect of deforestation is caused by at risk of burning which can lead to waste wood Linking Words
therefore
it leads to a Linking Words
scarce
of micro-organisms which is the main reason for the degradation of vegetation Replace the word
scarcity
hence
There is less biodiversity.
The final result of Linking Words
this
is less moisture in the air from plants which contributes to less precipitation after a big risk of droughtLinking Words
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