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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
#show #percentages #meals #three #nutrients
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The given pie charts
illustrates
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illustrate
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 information about
average
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the average
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 amounts of nutrients in basic
meals
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 which are eaten by people in the USA. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graphs is that unhealthy nutrients are mainly higher in
breakfast
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 products compared to other
meals
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 in the USA. Looking into detail, regarding
to
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sodium
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 and saturated fat, the percentage of
sodium
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 in dinner
meals
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 is higher than that in other food
with
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at
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 43%,
while
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 snacks and
breakfast
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meals
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 have 14%
sodium
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,
both
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apply
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.
However
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, the proportion of
sodium
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 in products eaten in lunch is just above a quarter.
Likewise
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,
meals
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 eaten in dinner consist
37
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of 37
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% of saturated fat which is followed by lunch at roughly a quarter. The food consumed in
breakfast
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 has 16% saturated fat,
while
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 snacks have just above
on
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one
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 in five. In terms of added sugar, snacks ranked
the
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apply
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first with 42% and
this
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 is followed by dinner
meals
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(23%). The percentages of added sugar in food consumed
in
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for
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breakfast
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 and lunch are just above one in
third,
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in total.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, breakfast, sodium with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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