The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
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information about
average
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amounts of nutrients in basic
meals
which are eaten by people in the USA. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that unhealthy nutrients are mainly higher in
breakfast
products compared to other
meals
in the USA. Looking into detail, regarding
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sodium
and saturated fat, the percentage of
sodium
in dinner
meals
is higher than that in other food
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43%,
while
snacks and
breakfast
meals
have 14%
sodium
,
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.
However
, the proportion of
sodium
in products eaten in lunch is just above a quarter.
Likewise
,
meals
eaten in dinner consist
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% of saturated fat which is followed by lunch at roughly a quarter. The food consumed in
breakfast
has 16% saturated fat,
while
snacks have just above
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in five. In terms of added sugar, snacks ranked
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first with 42% and
this
is followed by dinner
meals
(23%). The percentages of added sugar in food consumed
in
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breakfast
and lunch are just above one in
third,
in total.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, breakfast, sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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