The chart below gives information about how families in опе country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant

The chart below gives information about how families in опе country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information Ьу selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant
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The given bar chart illustrates the way people who live together manage their budget in a week in an area in the years 1968 and 2018. The data is provided in comparison between eight categories.
Overall
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, it is evident from the chart that in 1968, families spent most of their
money
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on food,
however
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, as the plot twisted in 2018, most of the bucks were used for leisure time. Starting off with the year 1968, 30% of families spent their
money
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in order to buy food,
as well as
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housing to be in second place with 10%. The amount of
money
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spent on fuel and power,
on the other hand
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, had the lowest percentage of all with slightly more than 1 in 20 part of their income.
On the contrary
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, in 2018, individuals tend to spend a great amount of their weekly income on leisure time activities as one-fifth of each household puts their
money
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on these purposes. In
this
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year,
furthermore
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, housing remained in second place with almost 20% of all. Fuel and power
as well as
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personal goods, were both in the
last
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spots with less than 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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