The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the line graph illustrates the

temperature

degree

in

fahrenheit

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,

while

the bar chart shows the

revenue

of bathing suit

sales

in

USD

. Both line and graph

shows

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the changes over 6 months in 2012. It could be seen on the graph, that the

temperature

degree

and the

sales

of bathing suit trend

is

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are

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not correlated. The

temperature

increases

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has increased

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over the

last

5 months

,

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and hit up to 60

degree

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degrees

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fahrenheit

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Fahrenheit

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on

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in

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June.

On

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In

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January, when the

temperature

is still

on

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at

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30

degree

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degrees

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, swimsuit sale

revenue

is at 100 thousand

USD

.

Then

,

the

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both

trend

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trends

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increase

thoroughout

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throughout

February and

march

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March

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. By April,

swisuit

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swimsuit

swimsuits

revenue

hits

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its

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peak. It reaches 300 thousand

USD

,

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when the

temperature

is still below 50

fahrenheit

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Fahrenheit

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.

On

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In

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May, the

sales

dropped dramatically

tp

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to

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below January's

sales

.

Lastly

,

on

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in

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June,

the

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when the

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summer starts and

temperature

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the temperature

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reach

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reaches

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over 60 degrees, the swimsuit

revenue

did not even

reached

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reach

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50 thousand

USD

.