Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • describe the situation you are facing • why do you consider it a problem • what change you would like to recommend

Dear sir or madam The reason why

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am writing to you is that

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want to inform you about the problem with the

transportation

system in my area,

as well as

suggest some solutions to make the situation better. I have been living in

this

city since

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was born.

Although

this

region is modernized with some

transportation

systems, one problem is the poor

of

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transport machines. There is a train and some buses in

this

area, but the

transports

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transport

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do

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not comfortable for

childrens

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children

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and elderly people. There are some problems rooted

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this

.

Firstly

as the number of buses can not go to

corners

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the corners

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of my town, our city is becoming poor

of

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transportation

. As a solution,

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would recommend to

increas

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increase

different

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the different

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type

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types

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of

transportation

. In

conclution

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conclusion

,

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hope you will take all my words into account, and take

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proper action. Best regards John Smith