The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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I glance at the two maps

provide

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the recent layout of a

town

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and its future proposed plan.

Overall

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, the vast majority of the facilities, roads and transportation system will be at the same locations, whilst the airfield will be removed.

According to

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the information shown on the maps, the airfield will be replaced by an industrial estate which connects with the A2

road

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and the

railway

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Besides

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, there will be an additional

road

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which is A4 connecting the A2

road

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and the

railway

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and the

railway

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and the

town

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centre.

Moreover

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, there will be a new roundabout on the

railway

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near the gas station. What should be particularly mentioned is the region of the build-up area ring

road

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is planned to be slightly reduced

due to

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the A4

road

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between the

town

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centre and the

railway

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To sum up

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, it can be apparently seen that the future plan of the

town

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focuses more on the arrangement of roads than facilities.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road, railway with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

161 words

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