The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
I glance at the two maps
provide
the recent layout of a Correct pronoun usage
that provide
town
and its future proposed plan.
Overall
, the vast majority of the facilities, roads and transportation system will be at the same locations, whilst the airfield will be removed.
According to
the information shown on the maps, the airfield will be replaced by an industrial estate which connects with the A2 road
and the railway
. Besides
, there will be an additional road
which is A4 connecting the A2 road
and the railway
and the railway
and the town
centre. Moreover
, there will be a new roundabout on the railway
near the gas station. What should be particularly mentioned is the region of the build-up area ring road
is planned to be slightly reduced due to
the A4 road
between the town
centre and the railway
.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the future plan of the town
focuses more on the arrangement of roads than facilities.Submitted by s99104032 on
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