The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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I glance at the two maps

provide

Correct pronoun usage

that provide

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the recent layout of a

town

and its future proposed plan.

Overall

, the vast majority of the facilities, roads and transportation system will be at the same locations, whilst the airfield will be removed.

According to

the information shown on the maps, the airfield will be replaced by an industrial estate which connects with the A2

road

and the

railway

Besides

, there will be an additional

road

which is A4 connecting the A2

road

and the

railway

and the

railway

and the

town

centre.

Moreover

, there will be a new roundabout on the

railway

near the gas station. What should be particularly mentioned is the region of the build-up area ring

road

is planned to be slightly reduced

due to

the A4

road

between the

town

centre and the

railway

To sum up

, it can be apparently seen that the future plan of the

town

focuses more on the arrangement of roads than facilities.

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