Some people are making new friends by using socializing network website and Internet chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people say that people should make new friends by face-to-face chat. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.
Friendship is one of the basic requirements of human beings. In
this
regard, some of them create it by exploiting the internet such
as social networks and web pages and believe that it is a reasonable concept and others say that to make friends one has to meet in person. In this
essay, I will explore the reasons behind this
reason and discuss whether it is a positive or negative impact.
To begin
with, the majority of them believe that making new friends from social media and other online platforms are
quite safe. A professor from Jakarta, namely Profesor Johan made a report about ''what Correct subject-verb agreement
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people
would choose whether socializing network website or in-person meeting. The main result shows that 80% of people
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such
as less effort and also
safety before they meet in person. Enormous threats will be affected and someone should double-check before they meet each other.
However
, the
others (especially older Correct article usage
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people
) prefer face-to-face chat. If they feel safe, they will always keep trying to meet in person. To overcome this
shortcoming, the easiest way before meeting someone is due diligence by telephone call. The expression, the behaviour, and also
the gesture are the top three that you would not get only by internet or website chat rooms. If someone will make close friend
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Furthermore
, places are crucial factors for the first time to meet
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To conclude
, it seems to me that a combination of both standpoints could be the most appropriate solution. Less effort and safety are quite safe for certain people
. However
, it's not sufficient for particular people
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