The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.
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A glance at the table provides information about underground
railway
systems in six areas including London
, Paris, Tokoyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los
Angeles
with the open dates, the length of routes and, annual passengers
in millions.
Overall
, London
has the oldest and longest underground railway
system
while
Tokyo's underground railway
system
has the most passengers
per year.Besides
, the underground railway
system
in Los
Angeles
is the newest, whilst the route of Kyoto’s underground railway
system
is the shortest.
According to
the data shown in the table, London
’s underground railway
system
opened in 1863 which is 138 years earlier than Los
Angeles
's which opened in 2001. With the shortest route, the annual passengers
of Kyoto’s underground railway
system
are the fewest which are 45 million people. Although
the route of Tokyo’s underground railway
system
is only 155 kilometres which is even half less than that of London
's, its annual passengers
are 1928 million which is more than twofold those of London
's by 195 million people.
To sum up
, except for Los
Angeles
, the rest of the cities had underground railway
systems before the 21st century.Submitted by s99104032 on
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