The line graph below shows the international student enrolment numbers at De Salle University from 1980 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
number
of international students
from three different countries who attended De Salle University between 2005 and 2009. Overall
, it is evident that the enrollment of students
from Iran and Turkey both witnessed an upward trend, While
Greece experienced a downward trend in enrollment, with a significant decline.
Initially
, in 2005, Greece had the highest number
of students
, with approximately 180 pupils. There was a slight decrease in the following year, and in 2007, the number
dramatically dipped to around 70 students
. The figure remained steady for a year and then
decreased further
to its lowest point of about 45 admissions in 2009.
The second-highest number
of students
was from Iran, with nearly 40 students
at the beginning of the period. The number
of Iranian students
gradually increased from 2005 and reached the same level as Greece in 2007. Thereafter
, it experienced minimal growth and peaked in 2009 at 160 students
.
On the other hand
, Turkey started with the lowest number
of students
, only 20. From 2005, the figure sharply increased and surpassed the enrollment of the other two countries, reaching 85 students
in 2007. Afterward
, there was a slight growth, and by 2009, Turkey secured the second-highest position with 120 Change the spelling
Afterwards
students
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