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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
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The given chart depicts the proportion of females and males passing the driving
test
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 in one Asian nation from 1980 to 2010.
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, it can be seen from the chart that the percentage of female participants passing the driving
test
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 is higher than that of male participants over the time period in question.
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 that, the number of
men
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 and
women
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 who passed the driving
test
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also
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 increased generally.
To begin
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 with, in 1980 there was 48% of
women
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who
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passed the driving
test
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, which was almost more than twice
men
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 that of.
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the proportion of
women
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 passing
driving
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the driving
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test
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 in 1990 grew to 52% and was more than 15% of the percentage of
men
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. Moving on to the other categories, the proportion of female individuals in 2000 witnessed an increase of 15% and peaked at around 70%, but in the next decade, the figure decreased to 75%. The percentage of
men
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 was
also
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 lower than
women
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 in the two
last
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 decades but it remained unchanged at 49%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words test, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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