The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given line graph illustrates the amount of
of
fish , Lamb, beef and chicken Remove the redundancy
apply
were
eaten in a European nation during the Unnecessary verb
apply
period
of 1979 to 2004 in grams
per person per week
.
Overall
, the consumption of chicken increased over the period
while
lamb, beeef
and fish were eaten reduced with all four items posting wild fluctuations during the Correct your spelling
beef
period
.
In detail, in 1979 beef was the highest consumed non vegetarian
food item of the given four foods, with nearly just below 225 Add a hyphen
non-vegetarian
grams
were
eaten by individual per Unnecessary verb
apply
week
. However
, the amount plunged during next
two to three years , Correct article usage
the next
into
nearly 175 Change preposition
to
grams
and surged to a peak of more than 225 grams
in following
2-3 years.Correct article usage
the following
Thereafter
, the level came to a 2 to 3
Add a hyphen
3-year
year
plateau after a sudden dipped
over the next 1-2 years.Following it, with many Replace the word
dip
flactuations
with a Correct your spelling
fluctuations
downword
trend in Correct your spelling
downward
2004
it posted a level just above 100 Add a comma
2004,
grams
as the amount of beef consumption
per Replace the word
consumed
week
.
Furthermore
, in 1979 fish consumption was the lowest with near
60 Change the word
nearly
grams
per week
,while
it had declined slightly further
with fluctuations , maintaining the lowest value through out
the study Correct your spelling
throughout
period
.However
, chicken
was eaten just below 150 Add an article
the chicken
grams
in the year
1979, and with wild fluctuation
it had Add a comma
fluctuation,
been
risen to Unnecessary verb
apply
near
250 Change the word
nearly
grams
in the year
2004 and
which is the highest for that Correct word choice
apply
year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, grams, week, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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