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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.
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The line graph illustrates the number of increasing of people in
India
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 and
China
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 from 2000 and 2050.
Overall
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,
India
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 shows a significant rise,
whereas
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China
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 improves for a
while
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 after that the figure slumps down until 2050. the chart is given in billions. Turning to the details,
India
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 started at 1,000 billion in 2000 and shows steady upward trends.
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, in 2030, the anticipation of
India
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's population number overtakes
China
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 to approximately 1,450 in 2030 and comes top of the list, with nearly 1,600 in 2050.
In contrast
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,
China
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also
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 climbed somewhat quickly to just under 1,400 in 2020. After that, the figure remains almost unchanged until 2030, when
India
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 is overtaken by population, followed by a moderate drop to nearly 1,400 in 2050.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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