The charts bellow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of
water
which is used for three different purposes including industrial, farming, and household usage in six different region
of the globe.
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regions
Overall
, a rapid glance shows that in
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apply
one-thirds
of areas consist of North America and Europe the Correct your spelling
one-third
most
percentage of Correct word choice
highest
water
used in industry. While
in the other two-thirds places include South America, South East and Central Asia, and Africa use more proportion of water
in agriculture. Whereas
, the least amount of water
is wasted on domestic in all restricts.
North American and European people apply around a
half of their used Correct article usage
apply
water
in industrial activities with a slightly differece
, at 5%. These nations, in Correct your spelling
different
difference
domestical
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domestic
usage
have approximately the same pattern withAdd the comma(s)
usage,
2
% variation, which is logically followed by the bulk of Correct article usage
a 2
water
they are used for planting with around 5
% deviation.
In the next selected category, agriculturers Correct article usage
a 5
are used
the most proportion of Wrong verb form
use
water
supplies, with a small dicrepancy
in pattern just in South America which Correct your spelling
discrepancy
waste
more Change the verb form
wastes
waters
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water
on
other parts rather than the rest of Change preposition
in
three
parts of Correct article usage
the three
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