The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time (excluding email). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two pie charts, providing a comparison of various internet
activities
. While
the first chart compares the time spent by people
between 18 and 26 for various activities
on the Net, the second compares them for older people
between the ages of 60 and 70.
Evident from the information provided is the fact that although
making a booking for the cinema or travelling is the most widely enjoyed activity among older people
at 25%, it is the least popular one among the younger at just 5%. By contrast
, social networking is the most widely enjoyed activity among younger people
at 24%, whereas
it has the third stage among the older. Also
, for both groups, researching health data and making purchases have approximately the same popularity at approximately 21% and 12% respectively. Of these activities
, the least popular are playing games for the older population and making bookings for the younger people
at merely 5%.
It is interesting to note that regarding the time spent on diverse activities
on the internet, there are some striking similarities and differences among younger and older people
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