WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart indicates the percentage of average family cost using
income
during a week in a specific nation between the year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
in
1968 and 2018.
Nearly 17% of weekly Change preposition
apply
income
was spent to buy food
in 1968 while
the percentage of money spent to buy food
markedly increased twice to 35% in 2018. There is a similar trend can be seen in the figure
for purchasing clothing and footware
. 5% of weekly Correct your spelling
footwear
salary
was spent to buy this
kind of things
in 1968. After 5 decades, the Fix the agreement mistake
thing
figure
grew twice showing 10%. Moreover
, residents spent around 4% of salary
per month to buy fuel and power Correct pronoun usage
their salary
as well as
personal goods in 1968. The figure
for spending income
on these things slightly rose to 6% and 7% respectively in 2018.
By contrast
, the percentage of weekly income
spent on housing in 1968 is
10% and rose approximately to 19% in 2018. The spending on transport is similar as 8% of Wrong verb form
was
salary
was spent in
purchasing leisure in 1968 and increased to 22% in 2018. The Change preposition
on
figure
for weekly salary
spent on househould
goods remains steadily unchanged in these two years (7% or so).
Correct your spelling
household
Overall
, in 1968, people were willing to spend their money to buy food
. However
, people tended to purchase leisure, housing and food
50 years later in 2018.Submitted by 1434110674 on
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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